I’ve written fables in verse for many years, mostly so that I can work within a set of specific formal constraints. My fables are invariably made of seven couplets, in strict iambic tetrameter, with no feminine rhymes, inversions, or sprung rhythms. These constraints, mind you, are not arbitrary, but chosen for their poetic effect. At any rate, here’s one of them. Enjoy, if you can…
THE VULTURE AND THE JACKAL
A vulture and a jackal met
To settle on some scheme to net
More meat. The jackal growled, “A king
That we control is just the thing:
Some pawn that only seems to rule.”
And so they crowned a lowly mule.
The puppet monarch strutted, brayed,
And marched his troops in grand parade.
And when they cheered, he brayed some more,
And marched them off to fight a war.
As bombs were burst, and soldiers slain,
And trenches smeared with blood and brain,
The jackal and the vulture fed
Upon the mounting heaps of dead.
5 responses so far ↓
1 mamie // Nov 19, 2016 at 12:19 am
That’s excellent.
2 Doug // Nov 19, 2016 at 11:06 am
Thank you. I hope it doesn’t give you nightmares.
3 mamie // Nov 23, 2016 at 1:32 am
It did.
4 mamie // Dec 8, 2016 at 5:07 pm
I wish I could write like that.
5 Doug // Dec 8, 2016 at 9:44 pm
Thank you!